nicefinalbeam: (sup jun)
Erin ([personal profile] nicefinalbeam) wrote in [community profile] aibaexchange 2017-12-28 05:50 pm (UTC)

I really felt for Aiba in this story! His heart was so tied up in everything that had happened with Nino, he couldn't bring himself to completely fall for Jun. I can totally understand how not only would he feel like he could miss an opportunity to be with Nino again, but he might fear that Jun could do the same thing to him. It must have been hard to trust someone.

I love that you gave us insight into Aiba's feelings as things progressed. That he didn't just have jealousy as Nino and Jun interacted, but actually found them attractive together. I think that was a really important aspect of the story - if he only liked them individually, it may not have worked with all three of them together. Allowing Jun and Nino to like each other as well completed the circle in way, and made the whole dynamic more comfortable for me as a reader!

I'm glad that the way things worked out meant that Aiba didn't have to be lonely, but also! No one had to sacrifice a career for love. Everyone ends up with some balance, which is perfect :D

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